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Artist's Comments

"I watch you, traveller, I know where you go."

Notes: This was very enjoyable to work on. Particularly the branch, which was my most successful attempt at such a thing yet. I may put together a tutorial for how I make them soon, so keep an eye out for it.

Materials: Photoshop CS2 and my Wacom Intuous3.

Reference: A lovely photograph from *justmeina was used for reference for the anatomy and pose.

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Critiques


:iconevinawer:
Well, my english is not perfect but I will try to do my best.

I think it's a beautiful picture of a boy/girl with wings. I love so the critique is positive, of course.

It's so original because he/she (I will use she, I prefer but it can be a boy too) is watching something in the forest, so the girl has the back to us. Then, we can observe the wings perfectly, that they look so soft, like a real feathers.

The skin is so real, really! It's imperfect and the shadows are so realistic. She looks palid. And the hair isn't straight and perfect like a model, but it looks nice because she is in the forest, doesn't she?
Her posture is very well painted and she has a well-proportioned body.
My cousin said that you could touch her.

The colors you used for doing the forest are so well painted. I understand the background, although it isn't detailed. The tonality of all drawing in general is cold and dull, but not completly. You use the green and brown range. I like. The color is superior to form.

Good composition, because the center isn't the being and there aren't any element that disturb. The light is selective but it is credible.

When I saw it, I feel the girl alone and nostalgic, with a little hope.

Only there is one thing I don't like a lot: the tree. It's very well done, but... It looks like a plastic wood in some areas and it's too perfect to be a tree.

Even this little negative critique, great job.
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:icongnereitor:
beautiful! =)

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"Beware of the big green dragon that sits on your doorstep"
:iconpalemajesty:
Thank you very much :}

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Don't take away my Devils, because you'll take away my Angels too.
:iconweremoon:
I like how you've made his/her body. Shading and colours are very realistic, I like the pale tones. Good job.:clap:

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"idealny świat jest podróżą, nie miejscem"
:iconpalemajesty:
Thank you very much :}

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Don't take away my Devils, because you'll take away my Angels too.
:iconrenegade-angel23:
My words wouldn't do this work justice. Spectacular!

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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
:iconpalemajesty:
Thank you very much :} :blushes:

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Don't take away my Devils, because you'll take away my Angels too.
:iconiniquitire:
this is really really nice. makes me wish i were her. pretty awesome work. :D ^^

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:bulletblack:The world is a comedy to those that think, a tragedy to those that feel *~* Horace Waldpole:bulletblack:
:iconcybby:
HOLYSHIT.

I love the colors in this, and the way you did the branch. The pose looks so natural on it.

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:iconpalemajesty:
Thank you very much :}

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Don't take away my Devils, because you'll take away my Angels too.
:iconpalemajesty:
Thank you Cybbbyyy :hug: :}

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Don't take away my Devils, because you'll take away my Angels too.

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